the big stretch 2 (by sean)

[t.j. the pimp]

*walks in all quiet-like onto the stage in front of the huge crowd, who alll turned up to see this masterpiece*
[b][color="#FF0000"][size="7"]BE WARNED!!!!!![/size][/color][/b] *i shouted as i threw my hands in the air towards the crowd in attempt to scare them*

this kind of literature contains a sexual activity that has been extremely heightened (so extremely heightened that it could SICKEN!!!!! a normal freak like you and me), so again, i say [b][color="#FF0000"][size="7"]BE WARNED!!!!!![/size][/color][/b]

plus, if anyone wants to help me out with the other sex scenes, like missionary, doggystyle, and all that stuff, please feel free to do so... cuz i just skipped straight to the anal fisting.


1,000 ways to die: the big stretch 2

Ron Neeble always had a thing for heavy women and for trying new things. He was a lonely Caucasian weighing about 136 and still looked skinny for his weight; one day, he went to his local Walmart store, where he found this beautifully round Caucasian woman weighing in at 300lbs or so; after some idle chit-chat, he coaxed her to come back with him to his place where they had a few laughs (and a few drinks), before getting into what he really invited her over for…
First, they started with your usual sexual activities; he lays down flat on the bed, completely nude, stroking his manhood until it was firm and stiff as a cock should be while the woman slowly undressed little by little; once done, she turns all slow and sexy-like as she played with her boobs, bouncing them up and down and causing them to jiggle like two water balloons almost filled to the brim.
The man ushers her to come to him and she did, literally piling on top of him like a wild animal being fed and slowly works her vaginal cavity around his slick, meaty cock and proceeded to bounce up and down as if she was riding a horse, moaning and screaming as she reached an orgasm.
Several sex positions later, the guy then got bored, “Hey, I know what we can do.” He handed her the humongous bottle of silicone based lubricant and got on his hands and knees on the bed.
“What are you doing?” she asked confusedly.
“I always wanted to try this; I want you to anal fist me.”
“To what?” she asked again, even more confusedly.
“Just lube your hand up, nice and thick, and then work it on into my anus.”
“You sure about this? I mean, I am pretty big; doesn’t seem as it’ll fit…”
“Just slowly work your fingers in until you can get a whole hand.”
“Alright, fine.” she said. She continues to rub his puckered butt hole with her index finger as if she were in a lesbian porno, rubbing some chick’s crotch, all the while, the man moaned softly; she continues to work her finger in, slowly sliding it in and out, and in and out, and in and out, so on and so forth while the man kept moaning softly in ecstasy.
She continued until she got in two finger, then three, then four and finally got in her thumb; she worked that around until she slipped in past the wrist, “Are you ok?” she asked.
“Yeh, I’m fine. Just keep going…”
So, she continued, working it in and out as if her hand was a huge cock.
“Go deeper…” the man whispered.
“Are you sure about this? It’s kinda gonna get wider and wider as I go up.”
“Just do it.”
She proceeded to do as he instructed, she put more lube on from the point of her arm where the gooey, slick silicone had stop and went even further up the arm, literally stretching his anus about 4 inches or more; the man groans in agony for a few seconds and tries to cover it up with more moans of ecstasy, while the woman looks up and say with a faint sigh, “Deeper?”
“Uh… yeh… go for it,” he said as he grunted softly.
She takes her and squirts more lube on her arm up to her elbow and proceeds again to delve deeper; Ron’s ass getting wider and wider as she went further like he requested.
What little did Ron know, was that he was getting little tiny fissures along anus around her arm, which she kept delving, deeper and deeper, into him.
“Alright, this is ridiculous; your anus is splitting. Surely you don’t want me to go deeper, do you?”
“Just keep going ‘til I say stop,” he said in an almost inaudible speech.
She literally came up to her elbow and squirted more lube; she proceeded to go past her elbow in his ass while he humped back and forth as if he were enjoying it.
At the same time, sweat rolled down his face, but the woman could hardly notice it, because she was too busy wondering when he was gonna ask her to stop.
His ass had literally stretched around her upper arm as she was halfway to her armpit; from there, no matter how much lube she applied, her arm was having a bit of difficulty going any further.
“What’s the hold up back there?” he asked in another almost inaudible tone.
“What was that, I couldn’t hear you…”
“I said what was going on back there,” still he talked like a man, who had stung on the tongue by an angry bee as the woman continued.
“I can’t understand what you’re saying… but I’m trying to go deeper, it’s just that something’s not letting me…” she continued as he kept humping back and forth.
Moments later, a mouse jumped on the bed and startled the man, her screamed as he jumped back, making the woman’s arm plunge deeper, literally tearing his ass in two.
His screams grew louder and louder as it woke up the whole neighborhood.
Next day, the man was lucky to be alive as he was being transported on a gurney down the hall of some hospital laying on his stomach. Within moments, he arrived in the emergency room, where the doctors pulled off the covers and saw something even horrible than anything you could see an old or new horror film.
“Good lord…” one of the nurses said before covering her mouth.
A second nurse than ran out of the room with her mouth cover, like she was heading to the bathroom to throw up.
The doc and the remaining nurses stared in shock and awe as they looked at the disgusting, ridiculously wide… anus of Ron Neeble’s wild, adventurous night with the supposed woman of her dreams, or as he might call her now, the woman of his nightmares…
But just remember something, Mr. Neeble, you asked her to do it
The end

[b][color="#0000FF"]i have another one coming up, similar to what i put on Expansion Mansion (for those, who've been there and seen it)
this one will involve another version of belly inflation with the addition of beer and pain killers instead of a bud brownie or *special* brownie as it called.[/color][/b]

[t.j. the pimp]

i'd make it longer, but my descriptive skills aren't as good as they used to be when i was in college.
you got where, every time i try to get a foot hold on an idea for something, where it be my fanfictions, or sexual stories like this, [b][color="#FF0000"]MY OLD MAN INTERRUPTS AND IT MAKES ME CRAZY!!!!!![/color][/b] it makes me wanna....

[minx]

Pretty good from a writing point of view!

[z3n0mal4]

[quote]Several sex positions later[/quote]

[t.j. the pimp]

[quote name='z3n0mal4' date='11 August 2010 - 05:48 AM' timestamp='1281530880' post='196650']

[/quote]

i wanted to jump straight to the fisting scene before my dad interrupted, cuz every time i'm writing one of my stories, he always interrupts with something....
can anyone just write them for me and i'll add'em in?

[anllover]

this topic has so much fun in it. srsly

[t.j. the pimp]

[quote name='anllover' date='11 August 2010 - 03:02 PM' timestamp='1281564120' post='196760']
this topic has so much fun in it. srsly
[/quote]

is that... good or bad?

[anllover]

good. story is good. side topic about OLD MAN is also good. z3 comment pretty good.

[t.j. the pimp]

[quote name='anllover' date='12 August 2010 - 05:19 AM' timestamp='1281615547' post='196864']
good. story is good. side topic about OLD MAN is also good. z3 comment pretty good.
[/quote]

it really happens; i can't get a moment's peace with him around.
though, i was luckily able to finish this.

[Nasty_beth]

[quote name='ultimate gigalo' date='22 December 2011 - 12:32 PM' timestamp='1324557154' post='542136']
i kinda need your feedback on one of my older stories, "the big stretch 2" (my own personal sequel to the one who made the original big stretch

http://www.rosebuttboard.com/index.php?showtopic=32311

take your time.
[/quote]

The middle bit is where you describe the actual fisting is pretty much spot on, but the beginning and end seem rushed. Why don't you try re-writing this to really flesh out the details? For example, instead of

[quote]Moments later, a mouse jumped on the bed and startled the man, her screamed as he jumped back, making the woman’s arm plunge deeper, literally tearing his ass in two.[/quote]

you could write

[quote] Through the haze of blissful pain in his arm-stuffed rectum, Ron heard something squeak. Or at least he thought he did. He opened his passion-heavy lids, just a crack. "AAAAHHH! WHATHEFUCK!" Ron's head snapped back, his eyes wide. He scrambled backwards in panic, not caring as his lover's arm plunged far deeper than she ever would have dared into his guts. He had to get away, to escape. From the bed, the mouse watched with its black, beady, eyes and the couple collided and tumbled off the bed in a screaming heap of tangled limbs.[/quote]

I guess what I'm saying, is; try to add some more narrative and detail. Your idea is good, but it just needs more work.

I'm looking forward to reading the rewrite. Edited December 27, 2011 by Nasty Beth

[t.j. the pimp]

[quote name='Nasty Beth' date='26 December 2011 - 08:08 PM' timestamp='1324958885' post='546640']
The middle bit is where you describe the actual fisting is pretty much spot on, but the beginning and end seem rushed. Why don't you try re-writing this to really flesh out the details? For example, instead of



you could write



I guess what I'm saying, is; try to add some more narrative and detail. Your idea is good, but it just needs more work.

I'm looking forward to reading the rewrite.
[/quote]


thank you. i'll try doing that.